Me and Myself-Animatic

So, I did an lipsync animation a few years ago back in my undergrad, and I thought I was pretty clever. [link] Except I wasn't. I'm still not. So, its been two years, and I'm looking for a way to gauge my progress. And in my vanity, I decided to revisit that particular animation and see if I could do it again, better. But instead of jumping in like a cocksure idiot and just animating straight, I decided to play it smart (like a ....less cocky idiot). I made thumbs, made storyboards and made an animatic (NOT an full animation. That comes later). Which you're now watching. Sadly, no sound aside from the dialogue because I don't know how to do those things. Tell me what you think in the comments, and if you've got any advice as far as music and SFX go, let me know. Enjoy!